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***-=-THIS IS ADOBE READER 9, FOR THOSE WHO DO NOT HAVE IT-=-***
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Long time no post as far as chapters go. I personally don't think a whole lot of anything happens in this one, and I think this chapter was mostly spent building up to chapters 8 and 9 or something. Regardless, I hope you enjoy.
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Long time no post as far as chapters go. I personally don't think a whole lot of anything happens in this one, and I think this chapter was mostly spent building up to chapters 8 and 9 or something. Regardless, I hope you enjoy.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactEven though this chapter doesn't have much action in it, I still found it to be a pretty good read. Your writing technique if very good. Just like mine yours is growing as the day goes by. Your originality is good as always. I have yet to come across a zombie story such as yours. Your monsters in the story are so much more intelligent, then zombies; I sometimes forget I'm reading about higher being zombies.
As for impact not really much happened in this chapter as you said before. I was however rather intrigued by the fight between William, and Reaif. It was rather interesting that you made William run away, but then again when he's up against a bad ass like Reaif, I don't blame him. Overall, it's a good read.